tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.comments2023-04-11T19:06:24.033+09:00The Writing Studio BlogPaul Beaufaithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17947324521465705068noreply@blogger.comBlogger1670125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-41267158522620095532019-05-09T14:57:38.617+09:002019-05-09T14:57:38.617+09:00The page to which the following link points provid...The page to which the following link points provides background and context for the passage I translated. This resource page is in French: http://www.alalettre.com/boileau.phpPaul Beaufaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947324521465705068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-67580812803993532842015-03-18T09:13:16.876+09:002015-03-18T09:13:16.876+09:00I've posted two versions of my translation her...I've posted two versions of my translation here in hope that they might attract attention and precipitate feedback in comments as I gradually reorient the Writing Studio Blog. <br /><br />Once I'd posted the first version, which began, "Proceed apace, taking courage in small strides," I experienced a surprisingly strong sensation of infidelity to the original, because of a walking metaphor that I'd keyed spontaneously into the first line. <br /><br />That gnawing sensation would not abate until the next morning, when I composed a second version conceived during the night, which began with words already in the title of the slide and the post, "Hasten slowly," and which I felt <i>was</i> faithful to the original.<br /><br />Conservative (ver. 2) or progressive (ver. 1), which appeals to you, and why?<br /><br /><br /> Paul Beaufaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947324521465705068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-80548384545518540172015-03-18T08:37:13.180+09:002015-03-18T08:37:13.180+09:00Thank you for all of your comments and reflections...Thank you for all of your comments and reflections in light of some of the best of your predecessors' portfolios (PFs). I trust that reviewing products of predecessors' endeavours helped to focus aggregations and reflections in your own PFs. <br /><br />Now I'd like to tie off this this comment thread with a pointer to short lists of best products of your own endeavours the past year (2014-15). Those you will find at the end of a Friday the 13th bedtime post for this blog (<a href="http://writingstudioblog.blogspot.jp/2015/02/wsblog-bedtime-best-biblios-and-pfs.html" rel="nofollow">WSBlog Bedtime...</a>, 2015.02.13).<br /><br />Thanks again for your diligent and persistent efforts in Writing III and IV.Paul Beaufaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17947324521465705068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-14187455393980088482015-01-21T11:30:26.906+09:002015-01-21T11:30:26.906+09:00I think that Yuuki's portfolio is the best in ...I think that Yuuki's portfolio is the best in A class, because her word totals is exceeded to ten thousand. In C class, I think that Tomoka's portfolio is the best, because she wrote the blog every month. Karin https://www.blogger.com/profile/12120564592963037564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-21519060490611585562015-01-21T11:23:16.685+09:002015-01-21T11:23:16.685+09:00I think Yuuki's portfolio is the best of all b...I think Yuuki's portfolio is the best of all because I could feel his efforts for writing so strong. In addition, he tried to read many kind of books, soI felt so deeply impress with his comments about book reviews.<br /><br />On the other hand, Tomoka's portfolio is the best in C class because she explained her good points of essays and she gave some example of her concrete experiences about make essays. In addition, she made so long essay, so I think she is the best hard working person.Takahirohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15782564958308526949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-13122516980395987862015-01-21T11:20:46.457+09:002015-01-21T11:20:46.457+09:00I found Izumi's work was the best. She did her...I found Izumi's work was the best. She did her work with cleared English with simple sentences. The other's work was also good but some of them wrote in very very long sentences with complicated English. I think It aren't bad but It doesn't have to be on this work I thought. <br />From the C class I've chose the Yukie's one. She Wrote in cleared English and as I've seen her work, I felt that I wanted to read it. I just found Her English sentences weren't serious. It was really natural sentences like native English. It was really nice.Hayato https://www.blogger.com/profile/08637104162831964080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-71867706621338043972015-01-21T11:18:23.456+09:002015-01-21T11:18:23.456+09:00I think that Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A cl...I think that Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A class. Because he write the blog a lot, write himself opinion. In C class, I think that Tomoka's blog is the best. Because she had wrote it since summer vacation, it is 20,000 words. Sakikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08104163913770439894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-40422859038309119092015-01-21T11:14:19.141+09:002015-01-21T11:14:19.141+09:00The best PE I chose from 1A is Moe's. It has n...The best PE I chose from 1A is Moe's. It has no red mark and I could see her daily effort that she kept to write a blog in English. Form 1C, I chose Tomoka's, because she wrote much words than other people. The number is preeminent and I was surprised at it. Through I saw these PEs, I thought I need to work harder for my English improvement. Nanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893299085652117910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-54675478978265678242015-01-21T11:14:17.062+09:002015-01-21T11:14:17.062+09:00I thought be good is Yuuki's portfolios in 1A,...I thought be good is Yuuki's portfolios in 1A, because it was great, for example, book review were many words and he wrote more 15000 words in 1st semester. And, I thought be good in 1C is Tomoka's portfolios. She wrote more 20000 words in 1st semester, so I thought I cannot do it easily.Seinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09095392136968345797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-3844050432654495422015-01-21T11:11:51.064+09:002015-01-21T11:11:51.064+09:00At A class, I think that Yuuki's blog is excel...At A class, I think that Yuuki's blog is excellent. I couldn't write only 10000word. But, she wrote 15000words more. This class's essay is difficult for us. But as a result, I think that could this blog's words. I though that difficult both A class to C class. Momochinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07402152862772423129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-47648380351436829272015-01-21T11:09:05.653+09:002015-01-21T11:09:05.653+09:00In 1A class, I think that Izumi's blog is the ...In 1A class, I think that Izumi's blog is the best PFs, because her expression is easy to understand. Also, her sentence is not too long, so I can read it easier.<br />In IC class, I think that Yukie's blog is the best PFs, because she wrote her expression in a mass. It is very good idea that make some short sentences. I can understand what her want to tell some points.mayuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13718266263505821301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-8627688446219287742015-01-21T11:09:04.421+09:002015-01-21T11:09:04.421+09:00I think Moe's portfolio is the best in A class...I think Moe's portfolio is the best in A class because she explains a lot and I could recognize what she wrote on her blog. And I felt her English skill is natural and great. In C class, I think Nonoka's portfolio is the best because she analyzed her growth and actually she grew as number shows. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14389355986765471638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-40437666935955497122015-01-21T11:08:11.433+09:002015-01-21T11:08:11.433+09:00I think Nonoka's blog is the best in 1C class ...I think Nonoka's blog is the best in 1C class because there are a lot of information. She wrote it in detail, so I can understand easily.Shan-umehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06088939055344659284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-90472965962439781072015-01-21T11:07:39.549+09:002015-01-21T11:07:39.549+09:00I choose in A class, Izumi's portfolio. becaus...I choose in A class, Izumi's portfolio. because Izumi's essay and diary's words are long every time, In C class, I think Tomoka 's portfolio is best. because Tomoka's diary words is every time long and she finished 20000 word in 1st semester.Misaki Miyamotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04018074487317051841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-72764991324428203072015-01-21T11:06:37.320+09:002015-01-21T11:06:37.320+09:00I thought Moe's PE is the best in A class. She...I thought Moe's PE is the best in A class. She wrote averagely each month. She comment out to many students' blogs, and there aren't red color. It was very good PE.<br />In C class, Tomoka's PE is the best. There are many letters, over 20,000! She also comment out to many students' blogs. She wrote many letters in essay 2-02b, it was great.Yuka Yamashirohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10417877743573071127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-76910304430050484522015-01-21T11:06:23.943+09:002015-01-21T11:06:23.943+09:00I think Hikaru's portfolio is the best in A cl...I think Hikaru's portfolio is the best in A class, because he introduce his portfolio, and he wrote many words. <br />In C class, Tomoka's portfolio is the best, because she introduce her portfolio's detail, and looks good. She wrote many words on blog.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03144094421797384936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-35454683684844576332015-01-21T11:06:20.115+09:002015-01-21T11:06:20.115+09:00I chose the best Portfolio is Moe's one in A. ...I chose the best Portfolio is Moe's one in A. Her Portfolio is easy to understand for me. Her comments are very simple. I chose the best Portfolio is Yukie's one. Her comment simple and easy to see. I like their Portfolio. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14790329296318991733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-9486820923153894942015-01-21T11:06:13.539+09:002015-01-21T11:06:13.539+09:00I think Tomoka's portfolio is the best in clas...I think Tomoka's portfolio is the best in class A because she was a very hard worker. She wrote 21000 words. I am surprised it. I think she wrote hard. Good Job!<br />Next, I think Nonoka's portfolio is the best in class C because her bokk review is wonderful. She wrote over 200 words. Excellent.Maki Yamashitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13943052069602858429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-53531202978490013892015-01-21T11:03:29.434+09:002015-01-21T11:03:29.434+09:00I think that Yuuki's blog is the best Portfoli...I think that Yuuki's blog is the best Portfolios in IA, because he can write long blog and get number of words. In IC, I think that Yukie's blog is the best portfolio. For reason, she can write book reviews with many words. Akinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08760539722172482160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-58449033630038837882015-01-21T11:02:48.379+09:002015-01-21T11:02:48.379+09:00At C class, I think that Tomoka's blog is very...At C class, I think that Tomoka's blog is very good. Because, she wrote more 20000words. I respect her very much. Momochinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07402152862772423129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-44936983901097474692015-01-21T11:02:16.639+09:002015-01-21T11:02:16.639+09:00I think Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A class b...I think Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A class because it is easy for me to read his sentence. Thee are no red point, so I can find his effort in it. His portfolio tell me a lot of his experience, feelings, efforts.Shan-umehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06088939055344659284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-28768142560115827942015-01-21T10:54:46.948+09:002015-01-21T10:54:46.948+09:00I chose Izumi's portfolio for the best in A cl...I chose Izumi's portfolio for the best in A class because she looked at what she did last year carefully. In C class, Nonoka's one is best I think because she often used some links in her essays. It makes readers easy to get more information.Rukahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00243564480955903268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-28030988232364327482015-01-21T09:58:02.708+09:002015-01-21T09:58:02.708+09:00I thought the best portfolio from 1A class was Yuu...I thought the best portfolio from 1A class was Yuuki's blob because he wrote the most number of the words in the class. He wrote about 16000 words. It's so great.Mouri Taikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263899090547838910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-19462718395319197742015-01-21T09:46:45.178+09:002015-01-21T09:46:45.178+09:00In C class, I think Risa's blog is the best, b...In C class, I think Risa's blog is the best, because I like her sentences of introduce of portfolios. She pays attention to not to use same writing of expression, I thought it is good and, her blogs are good.azusahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061008975279300383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8411698790619656040.post-34278603137973488712015-01-21T09:36:04.488+09:002015-01-21T09:36:04.488+09:00I think that Hikaru M and Nonoka M are the best PF...I think that Hikaru M and Nonoka M are the best PFs in each writing class, because they were wrote a lot of words every month, and their PFs are easy to see!! In addition, they were writing many words in book review and essays!! Masuda Youtarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12521140545414781390noreply@blogger.com