Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Posts in Preparation of Next Essays


To prepare for upcoming essays, thematic movie reviews due next Tuesday (Writing Studio Calendar, 3rd essays due, November 4, 2008), last week I asked you to make two quickposts after you had viewed the movie to review, Mrs. Doubtfire:
  1. A quick list of themes that you'd noticed in the movie, with the labels:
    • essay prep., lists, quickposts
  2. A quick first impression of the movie, with the labels:
    • essay prep., free-writing, quickposts
In class today, I asked you to share items from those lists of themes found in the movie, and to reflect on themes shared in each class by making two (2) more quickposts, each on a theme shared in class. Please label your two in-class posts with at least these three labels: 1) essay prep., 2) free-writing, and 3) quickposts. If you wish, you may add the themes themselves to labels on these posts. If you click on the graphic (above), a larger format version will appear.

The purpose of free-writing in class today was three-fold, namely to:
  • demonstrate your fluency in writing on themes of your choice, and with or without reference to the movie;
  • lessen the number of weekly posts that you would need to write outside of class, so you can concentrate on outlining and drafting your essays this coming week; and
  • collect and publicize your thoughts relating directly or indirectly to themes in the movie.
Unfortunately, those of you who hadn't watched Mrs. Doubtfire had little other choice but to free-write without reference to the movie. All together, as of the end of class today, you should have had at least four (4) essay prep. posts on your blog leading up to your next movie reviews.

Between now and the due date for your thematic reviews of Mrs. Doubtfire, I would like you to make at least two more preparatory posts:
  1. A topic outline of the theme from the movie, including the main points that you want to make about it, with the labels:
    • essay prep., and
    • outlines (a new label for most of you, I believe); and
  2. A complete first draft of your essay, including:
    • a paragraph introducing the movie briefly, along with your choice of themes, and outlining the main points that you will make about your choice;
    • three or more body paragraphs explaining your interpretations of the theme (hopefully one evident throughout the movie), and supporting your interpretations with concrete, detailed examples from the movie; and
    • a concluding paragraph summing up your interpretations of the theme, and how you have supported your interpretations of it.
Students in both class meetings today asked how long these essays need to be. However they frowned at my stock answer, which is, "long enough to cover the themes you choose, and [to] support your interpretations of them." So I told all I would expect them to write at least 500 words, a round number that may suffice only if each and every word is on target, that is, on the themes that you choose from the movie.
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PS: If you have concerns or questions about this assignment, please spell them out in comments on this post, well in advance of the due date. Though I will be away on business in Tokyo (Friday, Oct. 31 - Monday, Nov. 3), I will make every effort to respond in a timely fashion to comments made soon (before I leave).
[+ 59 words]

Original post revised 2008.11.06 [+ 1 word]

3 comments:

  1. Hi, I'm Marina. I have a question. How many themes should I write an essay about?

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  2. Hi, Marina, thanks for asking.

    For this essay, I suggest choosing one major theme, or a couple of inter-related themes (on the same main branch of the class mind-maps). If you want to write about more than one theme from the movie at a time, the challenge of composing a unified essay around the themes you choose will be greater than if you choose just one.

    Cheers.

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  3. Ok, I see. Thank you for your answer. Have nice days in Tokyo.

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