Showing posts with label responses. Show all posts
Showing posts with label responses. Show all posts

Thursday, March 8, 2012

Links: Impactful Pet Peeves

On her blog about academic writing, Explorations of Style, Rachael Cayley suggested:
The perception among students that their writing problems primarily involve grammar means that they often view their path to improvement as both narrow and fundamentally uninteresting. Not to say that grammar is actually uninteresting (obviously!) but rather that students might engage more readily with the task of improving their writing if they conceived of the task as having a broader intellectual basis. Improving your writing isn’t just fiddling with technicalities and arcane rules; it is a matter of thinking deeply about your ideas and your communicative intent. Calling it all grammar can be both dismissive and uninspiring. 

To help us all come to grips with the challenges at hand in this Writing Studio, I'd like to ask you to read and reflect on her ideas, and to post your reflections in comments on this post. Here are few questions to help you get started:
  • Do you think grammar is interesting? Why (not)?
  • Would you take a(-nother) grammar course, if you could?
  • Do you believe weaknesses in your writing come mainly from poor grammar? 
  • What characteristics of your writing other than grammar concern you? 
  • What characteristics do you admire in the writing of others – that of your classmates, peers, or acquaintances (personal or scholarly)?
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Sunday, July 17, 2011

Comments for everyone to read and heed, with no further adieu!

[Comments and remarks in the table below focus on word counts and labels for blog posts.]


Comments Remarks
pab さんは書きました...
Hi Saori, 


You're not counting lyrics in this post as your words, are you? I see only about 45 words in your intro. to this song. That's barely 15% of 285 words. 


Cheers, PB
201171721:55

On Kimigasuki~Love you~ post

(2011621日火曜日)
pab さんは書きました...


Hello again, Saori. 


Would you please reserve the label "free-writing" for assignments in preparation for more formal writing such as essays. Please use the label "links" only on posts that include hyperlinks, and "media" only on posts that include media. 


Cheers, PB
201171721:48
Recommendations for labels to use and when to use them are on the Writing Studio Blog, Labels and Links page.
pab さんは書きました...
Hi Saori, 


You're not counting Ketsumeishi's words as your words, are you? I see only about 94 words in your intro. to this song. That's barely 15% of 615 words.


Cheers, PB
201171721:43
On Life is beautiful post (2011622日水曜日)
pab さんは書きました...
Hi Saori, 


You're not counting V6 words as your words, are you? I see only about 40 words in your intro. to this song. That's barely 20% of 190. 


Cheers, PB
201171721:35

On Song of thanks (201172日土曜日)

pab said...

Hi Miyuki,

Would you please use the label "essays" only for formal writing assignments that the whole class does: 1-01a-b, 1-02a-b, 1-03a-b, ...?

I'd also appreciate a response to my May 20, 2011, comment on your essay 1-02a.

Thank you.

PB
Recommendations for labels to use and when to use them are on the Writing Studio Blog, Labels and Links page.

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