I'm glad to see so many of your portfolios in such good shape, including those among Student Picks: Best Blogs in Writing IVc. Nevertheless, as I've been browsing around, I've noticed some recurring weaknesses in final portfolio presentations.
This post is the first in a series to point out some of the fine points on which your portfolios still have room for improvement. Over the next few days, if I note general weaknesses or omissions in several virtually finished PFs, I'll:
- Post about them on the Writing Studio Blog;
- Add the string "Buff&Shine-nn" (where nn is a two-digit number in the series) to post titles; and, if I remember sooner rather than later, also
- Include the label "bulletins" in the labels for Buff&Shine posts.
It looks like your PF is almost done. [However,] You need to add totals to §0.0, and paragraph (¶) counts to §1.1.
Then please put numbers in the blanks of the sections listed below:
5.2.2. ... ___ other labels attached to three or more posts... (and, if n>0: [Please specify:] Which labels, and to how many posts each?)
5.3.2. ... ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
Finally, please note that §§6.0-7.0 call for multiple reflections and suggestions. That little "-s" means more than one!
(comment on a student's blog, 2008.01.22)
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