Though you'll be building your portfolios on individual blog pages, using a modified portfolio template, I still hope that perusing the ten portfolios listed below will give you an idea of what you can do to showcase and reflect upon your own work in Writing III and IV this year.
§1A
- Portfolios for Writting IV, Setion 1A (2010.01.06)
- Portfolio for Writing IV (2010.01.14)
- Portfolio (2010.01.14)
- Portfolio for Writing IV (2010.01.08)
- [no title on original post] (2010.01.06)
§1C
- Portfolio for Writing IV (2010.01.10)
- Ｍｙ ｐｏｒｔｆｏｌｉｏ (2010.01.06)
- Portfolio Writing IV (2009-10 ) (2010.02.06)
- Portfolio for Writing IV (2010.01.06)
- Writing(2009-8) (2010.01.06)
- Portfolio for Writing IV (2009-10) (2010.01.06)
Please look all ten over, and let your classmates and peers know what you see and think in a comment on this post. Here a some questions to get you started thinking about portfolios.
- What impressed or surprised you most as you perused those 10 posts?
- What concerned or puzzled you most about those portfolios?
- What did you notice that might strengthen portfolio presentations?
- What did you notice that might weaken portfolio presentations?
- What else would you like to know about developing your own portfolios?
I look forward to reading lots of thoughtful and though-provoking comments on this post.
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ReplyDeleteI surprised at 10 portfolios, because the number of letters over 5000 in a moth.
ReplyDeleteAll of ten were created with their steady efforts. I try to write my blog harder like them.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at 10 portfolios because their portfolios are so good. They wrote almost over 15000 words. I'll try to write lots like them.
ReplyDeleteten portfolios are so great!!! they post more than 5000 words in a month. when i have time to post, I have to post a lot.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at the number of words all blogs. I concerned about what they posts a lot in a month. They wrote a lot of words in each essays and book reviews. I can't find their weakness. I want to write many words in the posts.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised that many people wrote from summer vacation.
ReplyDeleteMost people didn't write over 10000, I think it is weakness point.
One of the people use the graphics over 50, so I want to consult it.
The strength point is posting many link.
Many people were commented their blog, I concerned about it.
I surprised that almost all the student write a lot. Also, during summer vacation they write a blog many times. I think someone who has strengthen portfolio presentation writes many reviews. In contrast, I noticed someone who has weaken portfolio presentation hardly writes other reviews. I'd like to know what to write except diary.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at 10 people's portfolios. They wrote a lot of words! I would like to write a lot of blog post.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised that some students have written more than 15,000 words, because it's hard for me to write even 10,000 words.
ReplyDeleteI concerned about their tendency of posting like which month they post the most.
I noticed that most of their paragraphs tend to increase as they post.
I couldn't find weaken points.
Should I post more than 10,000 words, right?
I was surprised at 10 portfolios, because they wrote many words.
ReplyDeleteI concerned about their word counts. They wrote about 15000 words.
I think we need post thoroughly in order to strengthen.
Weaken portfolio presentation was posted infrequent.
What shall I do to make a good portfolio?
I was impressed by 10 portfolios. Especially, Yuria's blog, because it is very cute and letter's color is pink!!! I like pink ;) I want to be cute my portfolios. And, I also want to post over 10000 words.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at their portfolios because they write a lot of words. I have to write a lot.
ReplyDelete-most if they say that they improved their English skills with posting blog.
ReplyDelete-check your own portfolios as often as you can to strengthen portfolio.
-could not to find any weaken portfolio
-How many BRs do i need to finish in this semester?
Their portfolio is good. I was surprised at 10 portfolios, because one of the people wrote over 15000 words.
ReplyDeleteI impressed many words and many comments. My blog comments is few.
ReplyDeleteIt was good! Then her blog is very cute. I will try.
I was surprised at their blogs so much!!
ReplyDeleteTheir blogs are so nice.
I want to write my blog more.
I was surprised at 10 portfolios and their English skill.
ReplyDeleteI think their blogs are so cute and awesome!!!
I will try to write over 10000 words.
I surprised these ten blogs over 10,000 words. In addition to over 1,000 words in month. I don't over 1,000 words in month now, so I repentance that why I don't write more and more. I'll try hard from today.
ReplyDeleteI surprised the seniors wrote a lot of bolgs.I have to write blogs such them.
ReplyDeleteThe strengthen portfolio presentations is that readers can know easily how many articles writers keep.
I don't think there are weaken portfolio
I want to make my portfolio more cute! Because there are a lot of them are very cute.
I think that it is good idea. When I perused those 10 posts, I surprised at their portfolios, because almost student is written over 10,000 words. So I want to more write my blog too. I also want to develop my portfolios by keeping a daily.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at their number of word. They wrote over 10,000 words in a half year. That is twice as many words as I wrote...
ReplyDeleteI should follow their example.
I look ten portfolios and I impressed they used 10000 over words. I noticed that might strengthen my portfolio is many times blog posts and look some other blogs and comment those blogs.
ReplyDeleteI was very surprised number of their words in blog. They have been writing according to a schedule, but I wonder the number of words on August and September is extremely less than other months. I'll try to write over 10000 words!!
ReplyDeleteI perused their blogs, and I concerned about their number of blog posts! I don't see their weaken portfolio. I find that I need to post more blogs to catch up with them.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at their portfolios because their are portfolios so great. I have to write lots like them.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised at 10 portfolios because they wrote a lot of words. I concerned about their blogs were posted deliberately. I noticed that strengthen portfolio presentation writes many reviews. I couldn't find weaken portfolio presentation.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite blog is Yuria's blog. Her blog is very cute and there are a lot of movies which link with Youtube. Most of people didn't achieve 10000 words so I want to achieve this. A few people took in some graphics so we have to use more it. I think that this point is weakness point.
ReplyDeleteI was impressed with each design of 10 links. All these blog are cute!
ReplyDeleteI was puzzled about number of words, because there were some person who they reached 10000 words and there were some person who they didn't reach 10000 words in first semester.
I noticed that all links are strengthen portfolios, and I can't find their weakness. I have to write more blog.
I was very surprised because these 10 posts were excellent.
ReplyDeleteThese posts are careful and good contents.
I must write 10000 words too.
I was surprised at 10 portfolios! They wrote over 10000 words. I like Yuria's blog! Her blog is so cute!They wrote blog deliberate. It is good.
ReplyDeleteI can't find weaken portfolio. All portfolios wrote many reviews.
I think all portfolio are very good! There are no problem.
ReplyDeleteI want to write everyday for my blog.
I was surprised at 10 portfolios. All of the people wrote over 10000 words in second semester.
ReplyDeleteI have to write a lot of words.
I was surprised at 10 portfolios because they write over 15000 words. I concerned about their blog design. Some blog is cute. I think we should write strengthen portfolio. Weaken portfolio isn't good.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised that all ten posts in second semester are over 10,000 words.
ReplyDeleteI thought it is became easy to post a blog in second semester by posting during summer vacation.
I want to know how to write more and longer.
I was very surprised because almost people's total words which posted this blog is over 10,000! I could feel their efforts.
ReplyDeleteThese portfolios make me think that I must type words more than I have ever typed.
I want to type a lot of words and I want to type more than the people who posted this blog!!
I was impressed at the third portfolio. I was surprised at the amount of the words in one month.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your thoughts in so many comments on this post! I'll be closing comments on this post soon, to avoid attracting any more comment spam, because I got one spam comment already. Please look forward to a separate post in which I reflect upon concerns and questions from your comments here today. Thanks again! PB
ReplyDeleteThough I'll close comments on this post after I post this final remark, you are welcome to continue browsing the links to predecessors' 2nd semester portfolios. If you want to find out more about portfolios due this semester, please check out this discussion post:
ReplyDelete+ 1st Semester Portfolios: Discussion Post,
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Cheers, PB