- View the slides in the presentation embedded below,
- Follow the instructions on slide two and slide three, and
- Review the portfolios that you find via the links on slide four.
Thank you in advance for you cooperation.
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Note: This post reuses and revises text from a previous post (Practically Perfect Predecessors' Portfolios, 2013.07.13) with the original author's permission.
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I think Izumi is the best portfolio of 1A because she analyzed her portfolio, and she expressed about her portfolio.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I think Tomoko is the best portfolio of 1C because she sufficiently analyzed about her.
I think Hikaru M and Risa T Portfolio are the best in 1A class and 1C class. They are writing many words every month. Also they are reading many book. I though I have to fight more and more.
ReplyDeleteIn 1A, I think Moe H. is the best. Because she wrote about explanation in detail.
ReplyDeleteIn 1C, I think Yuiki K. is the best. Because introduction sentence is not too long so it is easy to look and easy to read to me.
I think that Yuika's is best because she understand this portfolio and she study hard.
ReplyDeleteAlso I think that Risa's is best because she could make a plane so she is co clever.
I think that portfolios of Yuuki H is the best on 1A. The reason is he comment out for his blog comment's.
ReplyDeleteAlso I think that portfolios of Nonoka. M is the best on 1C. Especially, her book review showcase is good. She can write over 200 words on almost book review.
I chose Izumi's portfolio. Because she wrote explanation that she chose best essay and book review particularly.
ReplyDeleteAnd, I chose Tomoka's portfolio. Because she wrote many essays and book reviews a lot of words. I thought she is great.
I thought the best portfolio was Tomoko's blog in 1C class because she wrote the most number of the words. She wrote around 20000 words. It was amazing!
ReplyDeleteI think IA Yuuki's blog is the best, because I think her sentences are long, so we are easy to understand. In addition, her PFs have few misses.
ReplyDeleteI think Yuika's Portfolio is the best of all 1A. It is simple but it is easy to read. I also think Yukie's Portfolio is the best of all 1C. She wrote detailed explanations.
ReplyDeleteI think the best Portfolio is Tomoka's. Because her blog's total counts of words is over 20000 words. it is very hard for me. Add to she wrote some book reviews about 500 words and good sentences.
ReplyDeleteAnother best Portfolio is Izumi's. Because she was writing 47 in just January. And she wrote a lot of diary and so good.
I choose blogs of Tomoka W and Yuri Y. I think that these are the best blogs.
ReplyDeleteFirst I am going to talk about Tomoka's blog. She wrote a lot of words. She wrote about 21000 words. I was very surprised this word. I think that she maybe like writing. She is so nice fight.
Next I am going to talk about Yuri's blog. I think that she writes it in a right number of words. Especially, I think that Essay's words is the best. And she writes simple. I think that simple is the best.
I think that Hikaru M and Nonoka M are the best PFs in each writing class, because they were wrote a lot of words every month, and their PFs are easy to see!! In addition, they were writing many words in book review and essays!!
ReplyDeleteIn C class, I think Risa's blog is the best, because I like her sentences of introduce of portfolios. She pays attention to not to use same writing of expression, I thought it is good and, her blogs are good.
ReplyDeleteI thought the best portfolio from 1A class was Yuuki's blob because he wrote the most number of the words in the class. He wrote about 16000 words. It's so great.
ReplyDeleteI chose Izumi's portfolio for the best in A class because she looked at what she did last year carefully. In C class, Nonoka's one is best I think because she often used some links in her essays. It makes readers easy to get more information.
ReplyDeleteI think Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A class because it is easy for me to read his sentence. Thee are no red point, so I can find his effort in it. His portfolio tell me a lot of his experience, feelings, efforts.
ReplyDeleteAt C class, I think that Tomoka's blog is very good. Because, she wrote more 20000words. I respect her very much.
ReplyDeleteI think that Yuuki's blog is the best Portfolios in IA, because he can write long blog and get number of words. In IC, I think that Yukie's blog is the best portfolio. For reason, she can write book reviews with many words.
ReplyDeleteI think Tomoka's portfolio is the best in class A because she was a very hard worker. She wrote 21000 words. I am surprised it. I think she wrote hard. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteNext, I think Nonoka's portfolio is the best in class C because her bokk review is wonderful. She wrote over 200 words. Excellent.
I chose the best Portfolio is Moe's one in A. Her Portfolio is easy to understand for me. Her comments are very simple. I chose the best Portfolio is Yukie's one. Her comment simple and easy to see. I like their Portfolio.
ReplyDeleteI think Hikaru's portfolio is the best in A class, because he introduce his portfolio, and he wrote many words.
ReplyDeleteIn C class, Tomoka's portfolio is the best, because she introduce her portfolio's detail, and looks good. She wrote many words on blog.
I thought Moe's PE is the best in A class. She wrote averagely each month. She comment out to many students' blogs, and there aren't red color. It was very good PE.
ReplyDeleteIn C class, Tomoka's PE is the best. There are many letters, over 20,000! She also comment out to many students' blogs. She wrote many letters in essay 2-02b, it was great.
I choose in A class, Izumi's portfolio. because Izumi's essay and diary's words are long every time, In C class, I think Tomoka 's portfolio is best. because Tomoka's diary words is every time long and she finished 20000 word in 1st semester.
ReplyDeleteI think Nonoka's blog is the best in 1C class because there are a lot of information. She wrote it in detail, so I can understand easily.
ReplyDeleteI think Moe's portfolio is the best in A class because she explains a lot and I could recognize what she wrote on her blog. And I felt her English skill is natural and great. In C class, I think Nonoka's portfolio is the best because she analyzed her growth and actually she grew as number shows.
ReplyDeleteIn 1A class, I think that Izumi's blog is the best PFs, because her expression is easy to understand. Also, her sentence is not too long, so I can read it easier.
ReplyDeleteIn IC class, I think that Yukie's blog is the best PFs, because she wrote her expression in a mass. It is very good idea that make some short sentences. I can understand what her want to tell some points.
At A class, I think that Yuuki's blog is excellent. I couldn't write only 10000word. But, she wrote 15000words more. This class's essay is difficult for us. But as a result, I think that could this blog's words. I though that difficult both A class to C class.
ReplyDeleteI thought be good is Yuuki's portfolios in 1A, because it was great, for example, book review were many words and he wrote more 15000 words in 1st semester. And, I thought be good in 1C is Tomoka's portfolios. She wrote more 20000 words in 1st semester, so I thought I cannot do it easily.
ReplyDeleteThe best PE I chose from 1A is Moe's. It has no red mark and I could see her daily effort that she kept to write a blog in English. Form 1C, I chose Tomoka's, because she wrote much words than other people. The number is preeminent and I was surprised at it. Through I saw these PEs, I thought I need to work harder for my English improvement.
ReplyDeleteI think that Yuuki's blog is the best in 1A class. Because he write the blog a lot, write himself opinion. In C class, I think that Tomoka's blog is the best. Because she had wrote it since summer vacation, it is 20,000 words.
ReplyDeleteI found Izumi's work was the best. She did her work with cleared English with simple sentences. The other's work was also good but some of them wrote in very very long sentences with complicated English. I think It aren't bad but It doesn't have to be on this work I thought.
ReplyDeleteFrom the C class I've chose the Yukie's one. She Wrote in cleared English and as I've seen her work, I felt that I wanted to read it. I just found Her English sentences weren't serious. It was really natural sentences like native English. It was really nice.
I think Yuuki's portfolio is the best of all because I could feel his efforts for writing so strong. In addition, he tried to read many kind of books, soI felt so deeply impress with his comments about book reviews.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, Tomoka's portfolio is the best in C class because she explained her good points of essays and she gave some example of her concrete experiences about make essays. In addition, she made so long essay, so I think she is the best hard working person.
I think that Yuuki's portfolio is the best in A class, because her word totals is exceeded to ten thousand. In C class, I think that Tomoka's portfolio is the best, because she wrote the blog every month.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all of your comments and reflections in light of some of the best of your predecessors' portfolios (PFs). I trust that reviewing products of predecessors' endeavours helped to focus aggregations and reflections in your own PFs.
ReplyDeleteNow I'd like to tie off this this comment thread with a pointer to short lists of best products of your own endeavours the past year (2014-15). Those you will find at the end of a Friday the 13th bedtime post for this blog (WSBlog Bedtime..., 2015.02.13).
Thanks again for your diligent and persistent efforts in Writing III and IV.