Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Comment collection, 2012.05.09



This post displays a collection of recent comments from individual blog posts and pages, with brief explanations for everyone about:
  • personal information,
  • post titles
  • labels on posts,
  • comments on pages (new),
  • follow-up comment subscriptions,
  • Google Doc file sharing, and
  • editing HTML code.

CommentsNotes
pab さんは書きました...
Hi Ayumi,

Would you please remove your student number and family name (except for the initial, H., perhaps) from this post? Thanks.

2012年5月3日8:09
In general, reveal no more personal information on your blogs than absolutely necessary.
pab さんは書きました...
Hi Shiori,

Would you please reserve the key string "Essay 1-02a" for your complete draft essay in a new post? A better title for this post might be "Brainstorm about University Life" (without quotation marks).

Cheers, PB

2012年5月3日9:33
Titles of posts should accurately reflect the actual content on posts.
pab さんは書きました...
PS: The last three labels that you applied to this post need commas and spaces between them: "..., KGU[,] [u]niversity, student[s]" (without quotation marks or square brackets).

2012年5月3日9:37
Labels, like titles, should accurately reflect the content of posts. They need to be separated by commas, and should only be capitalized if proper nouns or acronyms. Use plural forms of nouns.
pab2012年5月9日 15:26
Hi Yurika,

Thanks for sharing your PPFs today. Now would you please increase the height of the embedded spreadsheet to about 500 pixels?

Cheers, PB
This comment is on a Proto-Portfolios page, rather than on a post. It is the first page that I've seen on which commenting is possible. However,
when I tried to subscribe to get follow-up mail notification, I kept getting error messages, like this: "サーバーへの接続中にエラーが発生しました。" So please tell me in class if you post replies in follow-up comments on Proto-Portfolios pages.
pab2012年5月9日 15:42
Hi Mari,

Just sharing your Proto-Portfolios spreadsheet, and embedding it in this page is not enough. You need to make data entries for all previous months right away, and then add entries by the first of each month from now on.
Same story here: This is another comment on a Proto-Portfolios page. Though comments on pages represent new functionality, follow-up subscriptions still don't work. So please tell me in class if you post replies in follow-up comments on Proto-Portfolios pages.

Complete Proto-Portfolio entries for each month are due by the first of the next month.
pab2012年5月9日 16:09
Hi Ayumi,

Though you have successfully published your Proto-Portfolios in this page, you haven't made entries for Feb., Mar., and Apr., which were due May 1. You also haven't shared the Google Spreadsheet with me so i can mark it. Please do so right away.

Cheers, PB
In order to get credit for Proto-Portfolios, you must share them with me from Google Docs, using my gmail address, and grant me editing privileges.
pab2012年5月9日 16:12
PS: you also should increase the height of the spreadsheet embedded here from 300 pixels (default) to about 500 pixels. In order to do that, you need to open this page for editing in HTML mode. PB
Students who missed the session on embedding Proto-Portfolio workbooks in blog pages need to make sure that they edit the iframe code on their pages in HTML editing mode, changing "...height='300'..." to "...height='500'..." (numbers enclosed in single quotation marks).


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2 comments:

  1. Hi^^
    I'm Ruri.

    Thank you so much for a English writing class every Wednesday!

    See you next class^^

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  2. Thank you, Ruri, for your enthusiastic participation in our Writing Studio.

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