The first four screenshots below represent topics that came up in section 1A (§1A, below). I've moved a few of the topics up, down, or side to side, to put similar topics together, and sub-topics at similar levels in the organizational hierarchy. The next three screenshots below represent topics that students in section 1C shared in class, some of which I've rearranged or re-combined as well.
As you review your own essays, and plan your next revisions, please feel free to select, (re-)mix, and match topics from either or both of the extended outlines below, to amplify and extend in Essay 1-02b what you've already written in Essay 1-02a.
§1A
RoughOutlines1A-1
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgxvdTgHqwl7-S3s5_EOA0LviWRcN9XGzfh86WSLcgt17jJyv1tCKJLjZ7DO5Ik0DUjry9mGJNTdrVb1yxOm-m6FRoU8_9F2xdx0ll4gr8SXq05iseZMfLcfR-15TWVKpVrIovS_yzwe2Y/s400/RoughOutlines1A-1.png)
RoughOutlines1A-2
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhA6nPgljPWjxEa3EegNL3toB0uXlDiOCjxIYYMvusPinrw9SQl7eP_V1m24YRSq3iKB8eZIxIgjsWr0qEML7XS2q8O5PmpaqKM5JwFj5Fo9DCbetiJrnRXcmRdY4LikZGD2jVTERvpUKM/s400/RoughOutlines1A-2.png)
RoughOutlines1A-3
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhtSrKPRe6uBOYHEoFUfG641vlGaxakMUOJRYt3wkTBkc9SSiopmZPwUKClK_eYUuFc5ZCrL58PY6vkBQwQc2ckZUxaXnaNT26THC3jXutz3MOtQGyAu2Z8u1qS8e8_ej4G5MAWfFK6vII/s400/RoughOutlines1A-3.png)
RoughOutlines1A-4
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiny6ytN_UcC8CIIh2Mu3HGk2j8m2KlRVkC-JKHVTZnB10ml6RZrJ4GSlfGZyL3CJEib5NcH9LblHYPhyphenhyphen6F_PetpYrBhh0qTAfNidFrB4q_LE12iG8i10wasT9foZacgpdXayvFNLv9I_o/s400/RoughOutlines1A-4.png)
§1C
RoughOutlines1C-1
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiQYQZvxTsuah6G2npcI_A_O_KRMuHJfNTT1HjS7q6gx929GhSAF9zC_ob5ikNTWSRCgjx16b0zBB6Z7vu1iHjE0_9Cn4spUP2dA64RpqyQdTsSEe5x2tq-7xMRdd25-3yqnEq68uTaFV4/s400/RoughOutlines1C-1.png)
RoughOutlines1C-2
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhQvOxbNhhG7BVmL13A8Yi3lwzRzQKI7kQW1wJEzdFpL0Q5RLSw1lIvK0-XzVVSSBTkuIzf-FwYTYd32Aq7p2lSuLTVa2c4TD-t0S5HJIa3_3KE-V3dTtUiiLUC9l5mo56IupGyyeW3BZQ/s400/RoughOutlines1C-2.png)
RoughOutlines1C-3
![](https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhF6eEQjhm-s4xSx4z7_l4RsANPUWJ5qQXXeldzjB7C-M8GeOy_6BpWfEAJs-ae6vSLUEGCStUQsqy9dIoeXz1wro9tK8fk6TOUFwSxhuZut-AgCGDMqw0EsMmtTQTVUmuW8bzMPSmKq48/s400/RoughOutlines1C-3.png)
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